In Goldberg’s writing, the poems that were taken from a
collection written by women who are developmentally disabled were interesting
to read. I was imagining what their handwritten poems looked like, and wondered
if they were similar to Jessica’s (a developmentally disabled woman I’ve worked
with for years). “Give Me a White”
was funny, but I wondered what “white” meant to her when she wrote “Please give
Marion Pinski a white”, and if white and write were similar or not. I’ve
noticed in Jessica’s writing that she writes other words that sound similar to
each other, like “bear” instead of “beer” or "six" and "sex." Those are just examples, not saying they are real life examples of hers or not. It doesn’t really matter though,
because the poems are written without worrying of being grammatically correct,
and to be able to write more free-flowing like that is great. I also liked how she talked
about obsessions, how everyone has them, and how important it is to get them
out of your system before writing the piece you want, and so you can be slowed
down to pay attention to details. Similar to the Button reading, noticing
details and being observant in a way that we normally aren’t is important in
creating a piece of art.
I thought it was important for Taylor to educate himself on
the biology of the plants, insects and fungi that he was painting. It connected
him to them more because he understood the processes of how they coexist, and
learn their life cycles of growth and decay, and even just understanding the
age of the tree and how much history has happened during it’s lifetime. I liked how he moved on to water, and at the end mentioned observing the water "as if you have never seen it before." I wanted to see some of the water paintings and found this:
I’m also glad that I read Bullough’s before Botton because I
had a hard time distancing myself from the Botton reading, and appreciating it, so I read it four
times the past week. The way Botton wrote this on painting made me feel like I
was there next to Taylor as he painted (once I was able to separate
myself). The transitions also
didn’t feel rough the fourth time!
I like the way you relate the poems to an experience you have had in your life. I found myself wondering what her hand writing looks like as well, since my journal writing has recently had me thinking a lot about hand writing. I also have to give you some serious credit for reading through Bullough's 4 times! I did NOT have the same patience as you. Well done!
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